Mr-Xii's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stick Antics II]

Good, but needs improving.

Although I can't doubt you animation skills. This movie lacks something. I liked the sketch where the stick wakes up with Austin Powers, and the one with a afro and the chainsaw. Maybe try some longer sketches next time..

LittleLuckyLink responds:

Yes I found too that those sketches just werent there.

[Heat]

Quite good

I'll start by saying my dark aura is because I am quite critical. Also i concentrate on cleaing out the rubbish.
Now, onto the movie. I thought your storyline was great, this is one of the few flash movies that actually has some form of plot. Your animation and art let you down however. I suggest using the line and straightened pencil tools more, rather than the brush. And sometimes the animation can get a bit dotty.
Where you characters supposed to have arms? Because if not, you could make it a siganture design (like Worms).
But overall, I thought it was fluent, well constructed and nicely animated. I voted a 4 for this, a 4 well deserved (this could easily get a 5!) !

KnaveX responds:

Thanks but the no arms design was based on madness. which have hands but no arms. Thanks for the review.